Sunday, 20 January 2008

The Final Curtain


my face couldn't settle
my eyes were oscillating
like a swing
and then i smile

it wasn't funny
it was rather sad
i was about to dance
in many other worlds
inside my simple mind
i see me the little child
i feel all what surround
and i look two ways only
either down to the ground
or up to the lovely sky

why should i explain why
whenever my lips get stretched
and my cheeks compressed
why did you smile?

7 comments:

This Lady said...

The picture is really beautiful.

Deema said...

This Lady:





Thanks :)

..::Amu::.. said...

I read and I read and I keep reading them..how can you write so beautiful words? they make me tear some times!

Someday said...

i look two ways only
either down to the ground
or up to the lovely sky

I've been stuck there for ever..

Deema said...

wow

..::amu::..

i love your comments they're full of energy!

thank you so much i am really sooooo glad that my words can actually evoke

i just write right away

i used to think forever of the right words, but not anymore,
no more filter ;)


Someday
wow you're right, although they should be infinite views it feels so limited!

Someday said...

That piece was soo good and means soo much to me, I’d be honored if I may use it as a quote! To keep on reminding myself of the other “true” views out there

Deema said...

Some DAY

you keep making up my DAYS :******