The Final Curtain
my face couldn't settle
my eyes were oscillating
like a swing
and then i smile
it wasn't funny
it was rather sad
i was about to dance
in many other worlds
inside my simple mind
i see me the little child
i feel all what surround
and i look two ways only
either down to the ground
or up to the lovely sky
why should i explain why
whenever my lips get stretched
and my cheeks compressed
why did you smile?
7 comments:
The picture is really beautiful.
This Lady:
Thanks :)
I read and I read and I keep reading them..how can you write so beautiful words? they make me tear some times!
i look two ways only
either down to the ground
or up to the lovely sky
I've been stuck there for ever..
wow
..::amu::..
i love your comments they're full of energy!
thank you so much i am really sooooo glad that my words can actually evoke
i just write right away
i used to think forever of the right words, but not anymore,
no more filter ;)
Someday
wow you're right, although they should be infinite views it feels so limited!
That piece was soo good and means soo much to me, I’d be honored if I may use it as a quote! To keep on reminding myself of the other “true” views out there
Some DAY
you keep making up my DAYS :******
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